Thursday, May 22, 2008
Wednesday, August 10, 2005
GEORGIA O’KEEFFE & THE ART OF SECRECY
By Renée M. Zepeda
M.F.A Candidate
ReneeZepeda@gmail.com
For D. Preziosi’s Reading Art
Naropa University
Fall 2004
As a young painter, Georgia O’Keeffe preferred to visit galleries of living artists rather than museums that contained whatever America seemed to be finished with. This is revelatory of a painter who valued the vitality that she found in the phenomenal world.
It is fascinating to think about O’Keeffe’s legacy (particularly her house in Abiquiu) in relation to the work of nostalgia on landmarks. It is also illuminating to inquire as to how her secrecy added to the enrichment of her legacy. O'Keeffe preferred to distance herself from critics, biographers, art historians, or others who probed. She resolved to withstand critics like Clement Greenberg (who stated in a 1946 review), ". . . the greatest part of her work adds up to little more than tinted photography. The lapidarian patience she has expended in trimming, breathing upon, and polishing these bits of cellophane betrays a concern that has less to do with art than with private worship.”
Private worship or not, Georgia O’Keeffe created an oeuvre that in turn left a legacy that continues to enrich the American nation. The intention of this paper is to explore the secrecy behind Georgia O’Keeffe in order to understand the artist.
Georgia O’Keeffe was influenced by the teachings and writing of Alon Bement and Arthur Dow. She observed that the highest goal of art was to fill space in a beautiful way. “My feeling was that it was her habit to constantly arrange things, to adjust them to the right balance. In her studio there was a row of tiny pebbles with a glass object. She spent a great deal of time lining up those pebbles,” said filmmaker Victor Lobl in The Art and Life of Georgia O’Keeffe. She alternated and blended abstraction and representation in her art, to arrive at a synthesis, calling it "that memory or dream thing I do that for me comes nearer reality than my objective kind of work" (letter to Dorothy Brett, 15 February 1932).
O’Keeffe was attuned to the sounds of the natural world. In her letters she describes the wild, blowing wind, the deep stillness, the animal sounds, the rustling of trees. These formed a kind of natural music, made up of the life and rhythms of the earth. She made art that alludes to sounds. She accomplished this through the form and dynamics of her composition and the pitch of her colors. But why did she choose the landscape of New Mexico? Part of her answer may come from a letter she wrote to Henry McBride from Taos in 1929:
You know I never feel at home in the East like I do out here--and finally
feeling in the right place again--I feel like myself--and I like it-- . . . Out the
very large window to rich green alfalfa fields--then the sage brush and
beyond--a most perfect mountain--it makes me feel like flying--and I don't
care what becomes of art.
I suspect that O'Keeffe knew instinctively what Donald Preziosi writes in his essay “Art History and Museology: Rendering the Visible Legible:”
Museology and art history came to maturity in the age of the European Enlightenment, whose central tenets were that transformation of character could be effected by transformations in the material environment. The idea that character and spirit would be molded by molding space and material circumstance is at the core of the modern idea of the museum, and indeed of art as such (Preziosi, 7).
O'Keeffe's art experienced freedom largely in response to the open spaces of the Southwest. This was a time when the roads of New Mexico were treacherous, and electricity, telephones, or other utility services were years away. She would test her physical and psychological independence by living beyond the fringe of civilization. This almost biblical exile was her fundamental path to sustained revelation (Cowart 1990).
In the Southwest O'Keeffe pursued the fantastic effects of nature, the forces of the elements, and the geological history evident in canyons and stratified hills. She could travel for miles without human contact or traces of development. She could also experience the contradictory overlapping of the rituals of the Native Americans and those of the colonial Spanish.
II.
Of interest, and rarely mentioned, and never closely examined, is Wassily Kandinsky’s influence on O”Keeffe. The book Concerning the Spiritual in Art, is one that O’Keeffe supposedly read during the summer of 1915 (Peters, 94). Kandinsky’s most important theoretical writing, Concerning the Spiritual in Art was ready for the opening of the exhibition of the “Blaue Reiter”. The Arnold Schoenberg Center in Vienna provides a summary of the book (http://www.schoenberg.at/). In the Introduction, “inner necessity,” is presented. In the first chapter, Bewegung (Movement), Kandinsky draws a triangular picture of spiritual life: a triangle with a single figure standing at its point.
In the following chapter, Geistige Wendung (Spiritual change), Kandinsky speaks of art itself, mentioning the Theosophical Society as a great spiritual movement. His appeal to literature leads him to Maurice Maeterlinck and Kubin, and he sees Claude Debussy and Arnold Schönberg leading toward a new kingdom of spiritual experiences in music. In painting he emphasizes Picasso and Matisse.
In the main part of CTSIA, in the chapter Malerei (Painting), Kandinsky investigates the effect of colors (as “vibrations of the soul”). According to Kandinsky colors are basically arranged warm-cold / light-dark. Each color is assigned a spiritually expressive quality, which he illustrates with musical examples. He takes the idea of “monumental art” and designs a new form, the “stage composition,” whereby dance joins color and music as a third element. In her great book on O’Keeffe, Sarah Whitaker Peters asks, “Was Kandinsky the prime catalyst for the musical elements in O’Keeffe’s art?” (Becoming O’Keeffe, 102)
O'Keeffe's willingness to borrow from photography may have been encouraged by Kandinsky’s belief that “the various arts of today learn from each other and often resemble each other. They are finding Music the best teacher.” She knew exactly how “to borrow from the angry swan the rhythmic line and not the swan” (Peters, 102).
In October of 2004, I was fortunate enough to visit O’Keeffe’s house and the Ghost Ranch in Abiquiu, New Mexico. Though I was disappointed not to tour the inside of the house (I saw only the high and thick adobe wall surrounding it), I was thrilled to see the landscape she inhabited and painted. I wonder about the tight grasp that the proprietors of the O’Keeffe properties maintain, and whether this has anything to do with America’s pride in its history and landmarks, as well as the advantages of secrecy. After the plethora of galleries in Santa Fe, I found myself in Abiquiu, where I jotted notes in my journal:
Ghost Ranch
Creosote, lavender, Echinacea
Mt. Pedernal in distance
Chama River
Gorgeous trees changed yellow
Red earth
Amazing rock formations
Prairies & mountains
O’Keeffe once wrote that it was her intention to resist the intellect almost entirely in her paintings. Heidegger suggests, “In order to discover the nature of the art that really prevails in the work, let us go to the actual work and ask the work what and how it is” (The Origin of the Work of Art). And what of the creation of her legend? Jed Perl provides insight in a 2004 New York Times book review:
Somewhere deep down, she may have understood that the size of her legend had little to do with the quality of her painting, and that in the end what she achieved was something true. (“Full Bloom: A Major Minor Artist”)
The fact that O'Keeffe became one of America’s top-earning artists in her own lifetime could not have hindered her image. With these thoughts in mind, I’ve chosen to include collages of her paintings with poems selected from O’Keeffe: Days in a Life and The Burial of the Count of Orgaz and Other Poems: new translations of Picasso’s poetry. The combination of two artistic masters from the 20th century creates a juxtaposition that, hopefully, amuses and delights.
*
*
*
South porch of Ghost Ranch house
Allen Ginsberg sits with O’Keeffe
Shows her how he meditates,
Crossed legs, straightened back, closed eyes—
Breathe slowly, other instructions
But she doesn’t mimic him.
He asked, “What do you believe?”
She outstretched her arm
Palm up in a semi-circle
In front of her toward Pedernal,
“It’s hard to say.”
Fragrant sage, clouds, blue sky
Rocks she had gathered
Beauty around her everywhere.
Later driving Allen & Peter to Santa Fe.
Allen said he was surprised
How little money she had.
I explained simple surroundings did not
Show her wealth. No need.
—C.S. Merrill
*
*
*
Works Cited
Cowart, Jack and Juan Hamilton. Georgia O’Keeffe: Art and Letters. New York: New York Graphic Society, 1990.
Castro, Jan. The Art and Life of Georgia O’Keeffe. Crown Publishing Group, 1995.
Harden’s Artchive. “Georgia O’Keeffe.” www.artchive.com
Kandinsky, Wassily. Concerning the Spiritual in Art. New York: Dover Publications, 1977.
Merrill, C.S. O’Keeffe: Days in a Life. New Mexico: La Alameda Press, 1997.
O'Keeffe, Georgia. Music—Pink and Blue II, 1919. http://www.whitney.org/
--------------- Narcissa’s Last Orchid, 1941. www.princetonartmuseum.org
--------------- A Sunflower from Maggie, 1937. http://www.mfa.org/
--------------- Oriental Poppies, 1928.
http://hudson.acad.umn.edu/OKeeffe.html
--------------- Lawrence Tree, 1929.
Perl, Jed. “Full Bloom: A Major Minor Artist.” The New York Times,
September 26, 2004.
Peters, Sarah Whitaker. Becoming O’Keeffe. New York: Abbeville Press, 1991.
Picasso, Pablo. Edited by Jerome Rothenberg and Pierre Joris. Afterword by Michel Leiris. Translations by Anne Waldman, Anselm Hollo, Cole Swenson, Paul Blackburn, etc. The Burial of the Count of Orgaz and Other Poems. Exact Change, 2004.
Preziosi, Donald. “Art History and Museology: Rendering the Visible Legible.” Oxford University, 2004.
Schoenberg Center. “Concerning the Spiritual in Art.” www.schoenberg.at
Stieglitz, Alfred. Georgia O’Keeffe: A Portrait, 1920.
http://www.okeeffemuseum.org/
By Renée M. Zepeda
M.F.A Candidate
ReneeZepeda@gmail.com
For D. Preziosi’s Reading Art
Naropa University
Fall 2004
As a young painter, Georgia O’Keeffe preferred to visit galleries of living artists rather than museums that contained whatever America seemed to be finished with. This is revelatory of a painter who valued the vitality that she found in the phenomenal world.
It is fascinating to think about O’Keeffe’s legacy (particularly her house in Abiquiu) in relation to the work of nostalgia on landmarks. It is also illuminating to inquire as to how her secrecy added to the enrichment of her legacy. O'Keeffe preferred to distance herself from critics, biographers, art historians, or others who probed. She resolved to withstand critics like Clement Greenberg (who stated in a 1946 review), ". . . the greatest part of her work adds up to little more than tinted photography. The lapidarian patience she has expended in trimming, breathing upon, and polishing these bits of cellophane betrays a concern that has less to do with art than with private worship.”
Private worship or not, Georgia O’Keeffe created an oeuvre that in turn left a legacy that continues to enrich the American nation. The intention of this paper is to explore the secrecy behind Georgia O’Keeffe in order to understand the artist.
Georgia O’Keeffe was influenced by the teachings and writing of Alon Bement and Arthur Dow. She observed that the highest goal of art was to fill space in a beautiful way. “My feeling was that it was her habit to constantly arrange things, to adjust them to the right balance. In her studio there was a row of tiny pebbles with a glass object. She spent a great deal of time lining up those pebbles,” said filmmaker Victor Lobl in The Art and Life of Georgia O’Keeffe. She alternated and blended abstraction and representation in her art, to arrive at a synthesis, calling it "that memory or dream thing I do that for me comes nearer reality than my objective kind of work" (letter to Dorothy Brett, 15 February 1932).
O’Keeffe was attuned to the sounds of the natural world. In her letters she describes the wild, blowing wind, the deep stillness, the animal sounds, the rustling of trees. These formed a kind of natural music, made up of the life and rhythms of the earth. She made art that alludes to sounds. She accomplished this through the form and dynamics of her composition and the pitch of her colors. But why did she choose the landscape of New Mexico? Part of her answer may come from a letter she wrote to Henry McBride from Taos in 1929:
You know I never feel at home in the East like I do out here--and finally
feeling in the right place again--I feel like myself--and I like it-- . . . Out the
very large window to rich green alfalfa fields--then the sage brush and
beyond--a most perfect mountain--it makes me feel like flying--and I don't
care what becomes of art.
I suspect that O'Keeffe knew instinctively what Donald Preziosi writes in his essay “Art History and Museology: Rendering the Visible Legible:”
Museology and art history came to maturity in the age of the European Enlightenment, whose central tenets were that transformation of character could be effected by transformations in the material environment. The idea that character and spirit would be molded by molding space and material circumstance is at the core of the modern idea of the museum, and indeed of art as such (Preziosi, 7).
O'Keeffe's art experienced freedom largely in response to the open spaces of the Southwest. This was a time when the roads of New Mexico were treacherous, and electricity, telephones, or other utility services were years away. She would test her physical and psychological independence by living beyond the fringe of civilization. This almost biblical exile was her fundamental path to sustained revelation (Cowart 1990).
In the Southwest O'Keeffe pursued the fantastic effects of nature, the forces of the elements, and the geological history evident in canyons and stratified hills. She could travel for miles without human contact or traces of development. She could also experience the contradictory overlapping of the rituals of the Native Americans and those of the colonial Spanish.
II.
Of interest, and rarely mentioned, and never closely examined, is Wassily Kandinsky’s influence on O”Keeffe. The book Concerning the Spiritual in Art, is one that O’Keeffe supposedly read during the summer of 1915 (Peters, 94). Kandinsky’s most important theoretical writing, Concerning the Spiritual in Art was ready for the opening of the exhibition of the “Blaue Reiter”. The Arnold Schoenberg Center in Vienna provides a summary of the book (http://www.schoenberg.at/). In the Introduction, “inner necessity,” is presented. In the first chapter, Bewegung (Movement), Kandinsky draws a triangular picture of spiritual life: a triangle with a single figure standing at its point.
In the following chapter, Geistige Wendung (Spiritual change), Kandinsky speaks of art itself, mentioning the Theosophical Society as a great spiritual movement. His appeal to literature leads him to Maurice Maeterlinck and Kubin, and he sees Claude Debussy and Arnold Schönberg leading toward a new kingdom of spiritual experiences in music. In painting he emphasizes Picasso and Matisse.
In the main part of CTSIA, in the chapter Malerei (Painting), Kandinsky investigates the effect of colors (as “vibrations of the soul”). According to Kandinsky colors are basically arranged warm-cold / light-dark. Each color is assigned a spiritually expressive quality, which he illustrates with musical examples. He takes the idea of “monumental art” and designs a new form, the “stage composition,” whereby dance joins color and music as a third element. In her great book on O’Keeffe, Sarah Whitaker Peters asks, “Was Kandinsky the prime catalyst for the musical elements in O’Keeffe’s art?” (Becoming O’Keeffe, 102)
O'Keeffe's willingness to borrow from photography may have been encouraged by Kandinsky’s belief that “the various arts of today learn from each other and often resemble each other. They are finding Music the best teacher.” She knew exactly how “to borrow from the angry swan the rhythmic line and not the swan” (Peters, 102).
In October of 2004, I was fortunate enough to visit O’Keeffe’s house and the Ghost Ranch in Abiquiu, New Mexico. Though I was disappointed not to tour the inside of the house (I saw only the high and thick adobe wall surrounding it), I was thrilled to see the landscape she inhabited and painted. I wonder about the tight grasp that the proprietors of the O’Keeffe properties maintain, and whether this has anything to do with America’s pride in its history and landmarks, as well as the advantages of secrecy. After the plethora of galleries in Santa Fe, I found myself in Abiquiu, where I jotted notes in my journal:
Ghost Ranch
Creosote, lavender, Echinacea
Mt. Pedernal in distance
Chama River
Gorgeous trees changed yellow
Red earth
Amazing rock formations
Prairies & mountains
O’Keeffe once wrote that it was her intention to resist the intellect almost entirely in her paintings. Heidegger suggests, “In order to discover the nature of the art that really prevails in the work, let us go to the actual work and ask the work what and how it is” (The Origin of the Work of Art). And what of the creation of her legend? Jed Perl provides insight in a 2004 New York Times book review:
Somewhere deep down, she may have understood that the size of her legend had little to do with the quality of her painting, and that in the end what she achieved was something true. (“Full Bloom: A Major Minor Artist”)
The fact that O'Keeffe became one of America’s top-earning artists in her own lifetime could not have hindered her image. With these thoughts in mind, I’ve chosen to include collages of her paintings with poems selected from O’Keeffe: Days in a Life and The Burial of the Count of Orgaz and Other Poems: new translations of Picasso’s poetry. The combination of two artistic masters from the 20th century creates a juxtaposition that, hopefully, amuses and delights.
*
*
*
South porch of Ghost Ranch house
Allen Ginsberg sits with O’Keeffe
Shows her how he meditates,
Crossed legs, straightened back, closed eyes—
Breathe slowly, other instructions
But she doesn’t mimic him.
He asked, “What do you believe?”
She outstretched her arm
Palm up in a semi-circle
In front of her toward Pedernal,
“It’s hard to say.”
Fragrant sage, clouds, blue sky
Rocks she had gathered
Beauty around her everywhere.
Later driving Allen & Peter to Santa Fe.
Allen said he was surprised
How little money she had.
I explained simple surroundings did not
Show her wealth. No need.
—C.S. Merrill
*
*
*
Works Cited
Cowart, Jack and Juan Hamilton. Georgia O’Keeffe: Art and Letters. New York: New York Graphic Society, 1990.
Castro, Jan. The Art and Life of Georgia O’Keeffe. Crown Publishing Group, 1995.
Harden’s Artchive. “Georgia O’Keeffe.” www.artchive.com
Kandinsky, Wassily. Concerning the Spiritual in Art. New York: Dover Publications, 1977.
Merrill, C.S. O’Keeffe: Days in a Life. New Mexico: La Alameda Press, 1997.
O'Keeffe, Georgia. Music—Pink and Blue II, 1919. http://www.whitney.org/
--------------- Narcissa’s Last Orchid, 1941. www.princetonartmuseum.org
--------------- A Sunflower from Maggie, 1937. http://www.mfa.org/
--------------- Oriental Poppies, 1928.
http://hudson.acad.umn.edu/OKeeffe.html
--------------- Lawrence Tree, 1929.
Perl, Jed. “Full Bloom: A Major Minor Artist.” The New York Times,
September 26, 2004.
Peters, Sarah Whitaker. Becoming O’Keeffe. New York: Abbeville Press, 1991.
Picasso, Pablo. Edited by Jerome Rothenberg and Pierre Joris. Afterword by Michel Leiris. Translations by Anne Waldman, Anselm Hollo, Cole Swenson, Paul Blackburn, etc. The Burial of the Count of Orgaz and Other Poems. Exact Change, 2004.
Preziosi, Donald. “Art History and Museology: Rendering the Visible Legible.” Oxford University, 2004.
Schoenberg Center. “Concerning the Spiritual in Art.” www.schoenberg.at
Stieglitz, Alfred. Georgia O’Keeffe: A Portrait, 1920.
http://www.okeeffemuseum.org/
Wednesday, July 20, 2005
1. Sing:
if in pieces
we are accurate
here
the 'we' accrues
*
Green moves through
the tops of trees
and she is watching herself
shake the day's stuff
lighter greens as each of
which includes a grey:
*she wishes for a bath;
some tea, clear water
and among the greys, or
beyond them, waning
*she wishes for peace,
peace of god and
finely into white, there is
one white spot,
*she feels calm, in control
without distress, still
*ruhe, peace; ruhig, peaceful,
quiet
it could be an egret
or a crane
of the water
where it meets
a strip of sand
____________
1 from Goest by Cole Swenson
if in pieces
we are accurate
here
the 'we' accrues
*
Green moves through
the tops of trees
and she is watching herself
shake the day's stuff
lighter greens as each of
which includes a grey:
*she wishes for a bath;
some tea, clear water
and among the greys, or
beyond them, waning
*she wishes for peace,
peace of god and
finely into white, there is
one white spot,
*she feels calm, in control
without distress, still
*ruhe, peace; ruhig, peaceful,
quiet
it could be an egret
or a crane
of the water
where it meets
a strip of sand
____________
1 from Goest by Cole Swenson
Wednesday, June 01, 2005
Fragments of Sappho
not one girl I think
who looks on the light of the sun
will ever
have wisdom
like this
*
For the man who is beautiful is beautiful to see
but the good man will at once beautiful be.
*
] the bride with beautiful feet
] setting aside anger the one with violets in her lap
] pure Graces and Pierian Muses
] whenever songs, the mind
] listening to a clear song
] bridegroom
] her hair placing the lyre
] Dawn with gold sandals
*
wealth without virtue is no harmless neighbor
but a mixture of both attains the height of happiness
*
lady Dawn
*
they say Leda once found a hyacinth-colored
egg hidden
*
transparent dress
*
makeup bag
*
"The birds are at their highest thoughts of leaving" [actually E.S.]
*
do not move stones
*
All the wrong he did before, loose it.
Make him a joy to his [lover]
May he willingly give her
her portion of honor
*
thought barefoot
*
] work
] dry land
*
] work
] face
if not, winter
] no pain
] I bid you sing
] you beauty
*
] for those I treat well are the ones who most of all harm me
*
He seems to me equal to gods that man
whoever he is
who opposite you sits and listens close
to your sweet speaking
and lovely laughing--oh it
puts the heart in my chest on wings
for when I look at you, even a moment, no speaking
is left in me
no: tongue breaks and thin
fire is racing under skin
and in eyes no sight and drumming
fills ears
and cold sweat holds me and shaking
grips me all, greener than grass
I am and dead--or almost
I seem to me.
But all is to be dared, because even a person of poverty
*
honeyvoiced
*
of the Muses
*
mythweaver
*
soda
*
manyskilled
*
celery
*
gold anklebone cups
not one girl I think
who looks on the light of the sun
will ever
have wisdom
like this
*
For the man who is beautiful is beautiful to see
but the good man will at once beautiful be.
*
] the bride with beautiful feet
] setting aside anger the one with violets in her lap
] pure Graces and Pierian Muses
] whenever songs, the mind
] listening to a clear song
] bridegroom
] her hair placing the lyre
] Dawn with gold sandals
*
wealth without virtue is no harmless neighbor
but a mixture of both attains the height of happiness
*
lady Dawn
*
they say Leda once found a hyacinth-colored
egg hidden
*
transparent dress
*
makeup bag
*
"The birds are at their highest thoughts of leaving" [actually E.S.]
*
do not move stones
*
All the wrong he did before, loose it.
Make him a joy to his [lover]
May he willingly give her
her portion of honor
*
thought barefoot
*
] work
] dry land
*
] work
] face
if not, winter
] no pain
] I bid you sing
] you beauty
*
] for those I treat well are the ones who most of all harm me
*
He seems to me equal to gods that man
whoever he is
who opposite you sits and listens close
to your sweet speaking
and lovely laughing--oh it
puts the heart in my chest on wings
for when I look at you, even a moment, no speaking
is left in me
no: tongue breaks and thin
fire is racing under skin
and in eyes no sight and drumming
fills ears
and cold sweat holds me and shaking
grips me all, greener than grass
I am and dead--or almost
I seem to me.
But all is to be dared, because even a person of poverty
*
honeyvoiced
*
of the Muses
*
mythweaver
*
soda
*
manyskilled
*
celery
*
gold anklebone cups
Friday, April 08, 2005
From H.D.'s NOTES ON THOUGHT AND VISION (City Lights, 1982)
Normal consciousness, pricks of everyday
discomfort, jealousy and despair and various
forms of unhappiness that are the invariable
accompaniment of any true, deep relationship,
all this may be symbolized by a thistle.
There are two ways of escaping the pain
and despair of life, and of the rarest, most
subtle dangerous and ensnaring gift that life
can bring us, relationship with another person--
love.
One way is to kill that love in one's heart.
To kill love--to kill life.
The other way is to accept that love, to accept
the snare, to accept the pricks, the thistle.
To accept life--but that is dangerous.
It is also dangerous not to accept life.
To every man and woman in the world it is given
at some time or another, in some form or another,
to make the choice.
Every man and woman is free to accept or deny
life--to accept or reject this questionable gift--
this thistle.
*
And in memory of Robert Creeley
who died on March 30, 2005--
Water Music
The words are a beautiful music.
The words bounce like in water.
Water music,
loud in the clearing
off the boats,
birds, leaves.
They look for a place
to sit and eat--
no meaning,
no point.
*
Kore
As I was walking
I came upon
chance walking
the same road upon.
As I sat down
by chance to move
later
if and as I might,
light the wood was,
light and green,
and what I saw
before I had not seen.
It was a lady
accompanied
by goat men
leading her.
Her hair held earth.
Her eyes were dark.
A double flute
made her move.
"O love,
where are you
leading
me now?"
Normal consciousness, pricks of everyday
discomfort, jealousy and despair and various
forms of unhappiness that are the invariable
accompaniment of any true, deep relationship,
all this may be symbolized by a thistle.
There are two ways of escaping the pain
and despair of life, and of the rarest, most
subtle dangerous and ensnaring gift that life
can bring us, relationship with another person--
love.
One way is to kill that love in one's heart.
To kill love--to kill life.
The other way is to accept that love, to accept
the snare, to accept the pricks, the thistle.
To accept life--but that is dangerous.
It is also dangerous not to accept life.
To every man and woman in the world it is given
at some time or another, in some form or another,
to make the choice.
Every man and woman is free to accept or deny
life--to accept or reject this questionable gift--
this thistle.
*
And in memory of Robert Creeley
who died on March 30, 2005--
Water Music
The words are a beautiful music.
The words bounce like in water.
Water music,
loud in the clearing
off the boats,
birds, leaves.
They look for a place
to sit and eat--
no meaning,
no point.
*
Kore
As I was walking
I came upon
chance walking
the same road upon.
As I sat down
by chance to move
later
if and as I might,
light the wood was,
light and green,
and what I saw
before I had not seen.
It was a lady
accompanied
by goat men
leading her.
Her hair held earth.
Her eyes were dark.
A double flute
made her move.
"O love,
where are you
leading
me now?"
Tuesday, March 29, 2005
Tuesday, March 29, 2005
East Meets West/ Professor Bhanu Kapil
Naropa University
Renee Zepeda
Watching Monsoon Wedding In Conjunction With Awakening the Heart:
East/West Approaches To The Healing Relationship (21 Points)
1. Scene: The TV station where the boyfriend of Aditi works:
“Just because India has gone global, should we embrace everything? What about our ancient culture, our tradition, our values? This is not America, this is India.” Aditi takes a taxi to visit the station (she doesn’t drive herself).
Conflict: The struggle to maintain Indian identity amidst globalization.
2. Alice the long-haired maid and her marigolds, a red dot in the middle of her forehead—the third eye or intuition?—she spills the glasses near the feet of her future husband. She wears a red sari, kohl drawn around her eyes. The sequence progresses slowly, nostalgic Indian music: foreshadowing of their romance. The romance of the servants.
3. Namaste: I honor the light within you. The greeting of the families at the engagement. The arranged engagement. The bride is so “fair and lovely,” the grandmother proclaims.
4. “He wants the White House theme for his daughter’s wedding.” Emulation of Western practices, styles.
5. “America makes everyone quit smoking,” says father of the bride offering rejected cigars.
From Trungpa’s chapter in Awakening the Heart:
Patients should experience a sense of wholesomeness vibrating from you. If they
do, they will be attracted to you. Usually, insanity is based on aggression,
rejecting oneself or one’s world. People feel they have been cut off from
communication with the world, that the world rejected them. Either they have
isolated themselves, or they feel that the world is isolating them. So if there is
some compassion radiating from your very presence when you walk in to a room
and sit down with people, if there is gentleness and willingness to include them,
that is the preliminary stage of healing. Healing comes from a sense of
reasonability, gentleness, and full human-beingness. That goes a long way.
[6]
7. Sequence of shots with music of the streets of Delhi during monsoon season. Children everywhere, a shot of a little boy lifting his foot as water pours out of his shoe. Is monsoon season favorable for weddings?
8. “America is going to be new for me. I can’t wait to leave Delhi,” says Aditi to her fiance.
9. The women gather for the bride’s shower to paint her palms with henna and sing songs about the choosing of a wife—not the fat one—the one who is fair.
10.Ria sleeps with a book of Tagore near her pillow.
From Trungpa’s chapter “Becoming A Full Human Being:”
It is necessary to work patiently with others, all the time. That is what I do with my students: I never give up on them. No matter what problems they come up with, I still say the same thing: just keep going. If you have patience with people, they slowly change. You do have some effect on them if you are radiating your sanity. They will begin to take notice, although of course they don’t want to let anybody know. They just say, “Nothing has changed.” But don’t give up. Something happens if you take your time. It works! (131)
11. The son of the family doesn’t want to go to boarding school—his father wants to toughen him up, doesn’t want him to be an entertainer (the word for entertainer in Hindi is derogatory?)
12. Cows in the reunion scene between fiancees, walking away as the bride is walking away in tears for her transgression. She is too pretty to let go; the well-spoken, handsome husband wants the reunion.
13. Regional critiques: “In my opinion, Punjabis are way too ostentatious.” “In my opinion, Bengalis are way too pretentious.”
14. “You are such a bloody feelunky,” says the dancer to the Austrailian-accented Indian (The Idiot) because he doesn’t know the traditional Indian music to dance with her.
15. At the engagement party the bride wears a beautiful sea-blue silk blouse and slacks. Her hair appears to be dyed reddish. Her fiancee pulls her away to the balcony for kisses. “We will talk all night,” he says. “Why would you want to talk,” she answers.
[16]
17. The characters sometimes speak the same sentence partly in Hindi and partly in English.
18. The eating of marigolds seems symbolic of the marriage rites, relinquishing virginity. The same marigolds that the father steps on in the very first scene.
19. The married servants are allowed to join the upper-middle-class wedding party. The men in the upper class wear pink turbans. The women wear red and sparkling dots on their foreheads.
20. A long-lost American-looking son with glasses arrives from faraway—Ria looks curiously at him.
21. Ending credits: “We are like that only/ 40 locations, 30 days/ Exactly & approximately.”
(2001, Mirabai Films)
Comments: Monsoon Wedding was worth watching three times in a seven-day timespan. It is really no wonder that it won the Golden Lion award from the Venice film festival in 2001. Mira Nair, the director and producer, is admirable for making such seemingly chaotic events cohere and for the fluid movement of one scene to the next, the intercutting of “street-scenes” and “family scenes.”
Said 2002 reviewer Emma French, “Nair’s hand-held camera work generally succeeds in creating a sense of intimacy and intense observation of family quirks and secrets. A pace nearly as frenetic as that of Moulin Rouge assists the film’s reliance on a sensual explosion of images and beauty. The climactic nuptials enable Nair to draw together all the intricate strands of plotting and imagery, providing an extraordinary rain-soaked outpouring of pure joy.”
I relived the joyousness that I experienced firsthand at an Indian wedding at The University of Michigan in 2003. The conjunction of the articulation of the characters and the liveliness of the costumes, music, and dancing created a rewarding atmosphere. Was the family Brahman, I wonder. The distinction between the castes in the movie was palpable and affecting. I identified most with Ria as an educated woman who wanted to progress beyond the traditional role of wife/servant and complete an M.F.A in writing.
Aditi the bride appeared to be in an enviable position, yet I sympathized with her situation on the line between India’s tradition and America’s “modernism.” There was a warmth between the actors that came through—particularly among Aditi, Ria and their brother, mother and father. Dubey the event coordinator provided comic relief and Alice the maid was a sympathetic soul. I don’t know how this film could have been better. Since I was interested in Ria, her character might have been developed more—her writing character—perhaps overdubbing of her voice reading from the Tagore book to show her passion and depth.
I appreciate the fact that the screenwriter was a woman; critic Emma French states, “Sabrina Dhawan’s script pulls off the achievement of creating a romantic comedy with real substance and style, conducted in a seamless and realistic mixture of English, Hindi and Punjabi.”*****
East Meets West/ Professor Bhanu Kapil
Naropa University
Renee Zepeda
Watching Monsoon Wedding In Conjunction With Awakening the Heart:
East/West Approaches To The Healing Relationship (21 Points)
1. Scene: The TV station where the boyfriend of Aditi works:
“Just because India has gone global, should we embrace everything? What about our ancient culture, our tradition, our values? This is not America, this is India.” Aditi takes a taxi to visit the station (she doesn’t drive herself).
Conflict: The struggle to maintain Indian identity amidst globalization.
2. Alice the long-haired maid and her marigolds, a red dot in the middle of her forehead—the third eye or intuition?—she spills the glasses near the feet of her future husband. She wears a red sari, kohl drawn around her eyes. The sequence progresses slowly, nostalgic Indian music: foreshadowing of their romance. The romance of the servants.
3. Namaste: I honor the light within you. The greeting of the families at the engagement. The arranged engagement. The bride is so “fair and lovely,” the grandmother proclaims.
4. “He wants the White House theme for his daughter’s wedding.” Emulation of Western practices, styles.
5. “America makes everyone quit smoking,” says father of the bride offering rejected cigars.
From Trungpa’s chapter in Awakening the Heart:
Patients should experience a sense of wholesomeness vibrating from you. If they
do, they will be attracted to you. Usually, insanity is based on aggression,
rejecting oneself or one’s world. People feel they have been cut off from
communication with the world, that the world rejected them. Either they have
isolated themselves, or they feel that the world is isolating them. So if there is
some compassion radiating from your very presence when you walk in to a room
and sit down with people, if there is gentleness and willingness to include them,
that is the preliminary stage of healing. Healing comes from a sense of
reasonability, gentleness, and full human-beingness. That goes a long way.
[6]
7. Sequence of shots with music of the streets of Delhi during monsoon season. Children everywhere, a shot of a little boy lifting his foot as water pours out of his shoe. Is monsoon season favorable for weddings?
8. “America is going to be new for me. I can’t wait to leave Delhi,” says Aditi to her fiance.
9. The women gather for the bride’s shower to paint her palms with henna and sing songs about the choosing of a wife—not the fat one—the one who is fair.
10.Ria sleeps with a book of Tagore near her pillow.
From Trungpa’s chapter “Becoming A Full Human Being:”
It is necessary to work patiently with others, all the time. That is what I do with my students: I never give up on them. No matter what problems they come up with, I still say the same thing: just keep going. If you have patience with people, they slowly change. You do have some effect on them if you are radiating your sanity. They will begin to take notice, although of course they don’t want to let anybody know. They just say, “Nothing has changed.” But don’t give up. Something happens if you take your time. It works! (131)
11. The son of the family doesn’t want to go to boarding school—his father wants to toughen him up, doesn’t want him to be an entertainer (the word for entertainer in Hindi is derogatory?)
12. Cows in the reunion scene between fiancees, walking away as the bride is walking away in tears for her transgression. She is too pretty to let go; the well-spoken, handsome husband wants the reunion.
13. Regional critiques: “In my opinion, Punjabis are way too ostentatious.” “In my opinion, Bengalis are way too pretentious.”
14. “You are such a bloody feelunky,” says the dancer to the Austrailian-accented Indian (The Idiot) because he doesn’t know the traditional Indian music to dance with her.
15. At the engagement party the bride wears a beautiful sea-blue silk blouse and slacks. Her hair appears to be dyed reddish. Her fiancee pulls her away to the balcony for kisses. “We will talk all night,” he says. “Why would you want to talk,” she answers.
[16]
17. The characters sometimes speak the same sentence partly in Hindi and partly in English.
18. The eating of marigolds seems symbolic of the marriage rites, relinquishing virginity. The same marigolds that the father steps on in the very first scene.
19. The married servants are allowed to join the upper-middle-class wedding party. The men in the upper class wear pink turbans. The women wear red and sparkling dots on their foreheads.
20. A long-lost American-looking son with glasses arrives from faraway—Ria looks curiously at him.
21. Ending credits: “We are like that only/ 40 locations, 30 days/ Exactly & approximately.”
(2001, Mirabai Films)
Comments: Monsoon Wedding was worth watching three times in a seven-day timespan. It is really no wonder that it won the Golden Lion award from the Venice film festival in 2001. Mira Nair, the director and producer, is admirable for making such seemingly chaotic events cohere and for the fluid movement of one scene to the next, the intercutting of “street-scenes” and “family scenes.”
Said 2002 reviewer Emma French, “Nair’s hand-held camera work generally succeeds in creating a sense of intimacy and intense observation of family quirks and secrets. A pace nearly as frenetic as that of Moulin Rouge assists the film’s reliance on a sensual explosion of images and beauty. The climactic nuptials enable Nair to draw together all the intricate strands of plotting and imagery, providing an extraordinary rain-soaked outpouring of pure joy.”
I relived the joyousness that I experienced firsthand at an Indian wedding at The University of Michigan in 2003. The conjunction of the articulation of the characters and the liveliness of the costumes, music, and dancing created a rewarding atmosphere. Was the family Brahman, I wonder. The distinction between the castes in the movie was palpable and affecting. I identified most with Ria as an educated woman who wanted to progress beyond the traditional role of wife/servant and complete an M.F.A in writing.
Aditi the bride appeared to be in an enviable position, yet I sympathized with her situation on the line between India’s tradition and America’s “modernism.” There was a warmth between the actors that came through—particularly among Aditi, Ria and their brother, mother and father. Dubey the event coordinator provided comic relief and Alice the maid was a sympathetic soul. I don’t know how this film could have been better. Since I was interested in Ria, her character might have been developed more—her writing character—perhaps overdubbing of her voice reading from the Tagore book to show her passion and depth.
I appreciate the fact that the screenwriter was a woman; critic Emma French states, “Sabrina Dhawan’s script pulls off the achievement of creating a romantic comedy with real substance and style, conducted in a seamless and realistic mixture of English, Hindi and Punjabi.”*****
Tuesday, February 01, 2005
Renee M. Zepeda
M.F.A. Candidate
Naropa University
7 February 2005
JOANNE KYGER—WRITER OF THE JAPAN AND INDIA JOURNALS
During the Summer Writing Program of 2001, I had the Great opportunity to study with Joanne Kyger. Her workshop—INVESTIGATIVE POETICS—introduced such fellow writers as Ed Sanders, Jack Spicer, Ed Dorn and Alice Notley. We read from Ed Sanders’ 1968: A History in Verse, The House That Jack Built: The Collected Lectures of Jack Spicer, Ed Dorn’s epic poem “Gunslinger,” and Alice Notley’s Mysteries of Small Houses. Joanne repeated Spicer’s notion that poetry is a form of magic, most potent when spoken aloud. Joanne also told us about Spicer’s Poetry As Magic workshop that included Robert Duncan. She would probably approve of this statement made by Spicer in 1949 :
Live poetry is a kind of singing.
It differs from prose, as song does,
in its complexity of stress and intonation.
Poetry demands a human voice to sing it
and demands an audience to hear it.
Without these it is naked, pure,
and incompletely - a bore.*[1]
Joanne Kyger was born in 1934 & attended Santa Barbara College. One day in January 1957 she drove up to San Francisco with [her] Siamese cat. She arrived at the height of the Howl obscenity trial, and a friend introduced her to The Place, the bar that was headquarters for Jack Spicer and other poets of the San Francisco Renaissance. She attended the Sunday Meetings lead by Spicer and Robert Duncan and gave her first reading at the Bread and Wine Mission in 1959 before moving to Japan with Gary Snyder. Joanne and Gary married in Japan, living there & also travelling to India (with Allen Ginsberg and Peter Orlofsky), events that are chronicled in Kyger's Japan and India Journals 1960-64. Kyger returned to San Francisco and published her first book The Tapestry and The Web. She moved to Bolinas in 1968 where she continues to reside, writing poetry, editing the local newspaper, and teaching (here) at Naropa University.[2]
Joanne Kyger’s writings include:
Phenomenological
Some Sketches from the Life of Helena Petrovna Blavatsky
All This Everyday
Mexico Blonde
The Japan and India Journals
As Ever[3]
Just Space: Poems 1979-1989
Again: Poems 1989-2000
In my copy of The Japan and India Journals, which Joanne signed, she also inscribed this message: “Write in your journal…
Everyday!”
[1] http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88v/spicer-bio.html
[2] http://epc.buffalo.edu/authors/kyger/
[3] http://www.raintaxi.com/online/2003spring/kyger.shtml
*********************************************************
Bhanu Kapil, one of my teachers at Naropa, has allowed me to post
a poem that she wrote with Jack Collom, another teacher at Naropa.
I think you will appreciate the use of waterbuffaloes in this poem.
*********************************************************
BREAKFAST ON A FOREIGN BALCONY
Hand-whipped water buffalo cream
Right down the gullet
A grizzle of whiskey in a cup
Filters through my mustache, heart, toes
I'm strong enough, perhaps, to massage the sky
But only in another country
Describe the coffee, there in the architecture
The coffee outlines the hand-cut tiles, with sensuous precision
Are we in the middle of an orange?
Espresso and tangerines for breakfast on a balcony
Are we near the sea? Is this Kolkata?
Or is this a synapse in the great dirt molecule?
Look, there's something flying overhead--
It's a real live animal - oh my god
Where I lived there were dark green hills
Shuddering in the whirl of the seasons
The animal lands. We speak. It says,
"Can I provide you with a dairy beverage for your tea?"
We clink our cups with our spoons
We smile. Each tooth is intricately carved
Meanwhile Evolution leans this way and that:
Means it's time for the waterbuffaloes to squirt their cream directly
into our coffee
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What was your response to this poem?
Email me at littlemartian@hotmail.com.
M.F.A. Candidate
Naropa University
7 February 2005
JOANNE KYGER—WRITER OF THE JAPAN AND INDIA JOURNALS
During the Summer Writing Program of 2001, I had the Great opportunity to study with Joanne Kyger. Her workshop—INVESTIGATIVE POETICS—introduced such fellow writers as Ed Sanders, Jack Spicer, Ed Dorn and Alice Notley. We read from Ed Sanders’ 1968: A History in Verse, The House That Jack Built: The Collected Lectures of Jack Spicer, Ed Dorn’s epic poem “Gunslinger,” and Alice Notley’s Mysteries of Small Houses. Joanne repeated Spicer’s notion that poetry is a form of magic, most potent when spoken aloud. Joanne also told us about Spicer’s Poetry As Magic workshop that included Robert Duncan. She would probably approve of this statement made by Spicer in 1949 :
Live poetry is a kind of singing.
It differs from prose, as song does,
in its complexity of stress and intonation.
Poetry demands a human voice to sing it
and demands an audience to hear it.
Without these it is naked, pure,
and incompletely - a bore.*[1]
Joanne Kyger was born in 1934 & attended Santa Barbara College. One day in January 1957 she drove up to San Francisco with [her] Siamese cat. She arrived at the height of the Howl obscenity trial, and a friend introduced her to The Place, the bar that was headquarters for Jack Spicer and other poets of the San Francisco Renaissance. She attended the Sunday Meetings lead by Spicer and Robert Duncan and gave her first reading at the Bread and Wine Mission in 1959 before moving to Japan with Gary Snyder. Joanne and Gary married in Japan, living there & also travelling to India (with Allen Ginsberg and Peter Orlofsky), events that are chronicled in Kyger's Japan and India Journals 1960-64. Kyger returned to San Francisco and published her first book The Tapestry and The Web. She moved to Bolinas in 1968 where she continues to reside, writing poetry, editing the local newspaper, and teaching (here) at Naropa University.[2]
Joanne Kyger’s writings include:
Phenomenological
Some Sketches from the Life of Helena Petrovna Blavatsky
All This Everyday
Mexico Blonde
The Japan and India Journals
As Ever[3]
Just Space: Poems 1979-1989
Again: Poems 1989-2000
In my copy of The Japan and India Journals, which Joanne signed, she also inscribed this message: “Write in your journal…
Everyday!”
[1] http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88v/spicer-bio.html
[2] http://epc.buffalo.edu/authors/kyger/
[3] http://www.raintaxi.com/online/2003spring/kyger.shtml
*********************************************************
Bhanu Kapil, one of my teachers at Naropa, has allowed me to post
a poem that she wrote with Jack Collom, another teacher at Naropa.
I think you will appreciate the use of waterbuffaloes in this poem.
*********************************************************
BREAKFAST ON A FOREIGN BALCONY
Hand-whipped water buffalo cream
Right down the gullet
A grizzle of whiskey in a cup
Filters through my mustache, heart, toes
I'm strong enough, perhaps, to massage the sky
But only in another country
Describe the coffee, there in the architecture
The coffee outlines the hand-cut tiles, with sensuous precision
Are we in the middle of an orange?
Espresso and tangerines for breakfast on a balcony
Are we near the sea? Is this Kolkata?
Or is this a synapse in the great dirt molecule?
Look, there's something flying overhead--
It's a real live animal - oh my god
Where I lived there were dark green hills
Shuddering in the whirl of the seasons
The animal lands. We speak. It says,
"Can I provide you with a dairy beverage for your tea?"
We clink our cups with our spoons
We smile. Each tooth is intricately carved
Meanwhile Evolution leans this way and that:
Means it's time for the waterbuffaloes to squirt their cream directly
into our coffee
*************************************************************
What was your response to this poem?
Email me at littlemartian@hotmail.com.

